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Canon EOS 350D + Tamron SP AF 17-50mm f/2.8 XR Di-II LD Asph IF + Canon Speedlite 430EX
Image size
2174x3261px 3.86 MB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS 350D DIGITAL
Shutter Speed
1/4000 second
Aperture
F/5.6
Focal Length
50 mm
ISO Speed
400
Date Taken
Aug 7, 2010, 4:36:33 PM
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:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Heh, a lovely effect that you have achieved here. I really like the pear shape, and the idea of a "Frozen Moment" that this photograph shows. The composition is nice, with the water central, but also some smaller drops around it. I also like the pear shape that it created. The contrast is obviously good too, with the white against the black.

Overall, the image is obviously very correct, very well captured, well lit. It has good detail and focus. However the main point is - it is just not original. It has been overdone too many times, and these shots just aren't that creative. Hence the lower marks for impact and originality but high marks for vision and technique <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>

Fantastic technique shown - Well done!

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